The paper we have been working on is kind of hard and easy in different ways. It is easy for me to write about my topic, but I was having trouble getting to three pages. I only had two major points and could not get to the minimum number. This weekend I found another point and got past the minimum.
I also started reading a new book called Eragon. The last book in the series came out and my sister was reading it. I decided to read it because they sounded like a good book. I'm not very far into it but it sounds pretty good. I also kind of like things about sword fighting and dragons.
I agree with your first paragraph Brandon, and we can all say there have been rough patches and easy slopes for us all. Your paper has great detail and is well over all (I would know because I revised it). I would make your paragraphs a little longer for responses, besides that great job! Look forward to hearing more about Eragon.
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I thought your paper was great Brandon, it had a lot of detail that supported the main idea. We all had ups and downs in our paper. I heard Eragon was awesome! I hope we get good grades on our papers.
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